smokie36
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Post by smokie36 on Sept 7, 2017 2:11:15 GMT 7
I would only suggest changing the last line to "in our foggy buggy". The alliteration will provide additional appeal. Try "Bunny Boiler", much favoured by certain mangos. Sorry for the reference <Bunny boiler>, see what happens m o ni c a. to the victor the spoils.
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Post by bunny boiler on Sept 7, 2017 17:26:49 GMT 7
Whale, whale, whale.
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buhi
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Post by buhi on Sept 7, 2017 17:31:22 GMT 7
Moments of deep thought. Silence for days. Then an explosion. A quiet one. An understable one Of my truth. Not easy. Not truth. How i perceive it. Let's have some music. Plus a photograph. Yes i loved her. Music:
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 17:34:45 GMT 7
Never meant that and you should know that. Your right to speak. Mine too.
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 17:37:31 GMT 7
And there was that conversation, all those years ago. I guilty, but she returned and said she could forgive. I said no.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2017 17:40:56 GMT 7
Yeah you did her a favour.
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 17:41:27 GMT 7
Better version:
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buhi
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Post by buhi on Sept 7, 2017 17:43:01 GMT 7
Yeah you did her a favour. Indeed.
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Post by bunny boiler on Sept 7, 2017 17:45:14 GMT 7
Who's the bright spark that said 'to err is human, to forgive is divine'. Doesn't always work and notice that photo is outside a church, noice take.
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 17:55:25 GMT 7
Photo is of my ex wife and friends from forty years ago, plus. Of church? Old friends of a time long ago. It came to a bitter end. Hippity likes that. But possibly a happy end, if there is such a thing. Old lady i see.Old man, me. Just kind of strange. The others in the photograph, well one i still am in contact with. Of my ex, no contact. Her mother and i did correspond until her death.
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buhi
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Post by buhi on Sept 7, 2017 18:05:04 GMT 7
Who's the bright spark that said 'to err is human, to forgive is divine'. Doesn't always work and notice that photo is outside a church, noice take. I always forgive, hate, hate. Does that make me weak or strong? It is what you forgive. I know no one one here, so have no right to forgive. Has any hurt me here? No. So no forgiveness required.
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buhi
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Post by buhi on Sept 7, 2017 18:30:16 GMT 7
The last time we met, ex that is, was in my cottage in Norfolk. Mutual friends arranged it. We were both re married. It was kind of funny. A bit like that photograph. No hate, no recriminations. But the knowledge we both shared.
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buhi
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Post by buhi on Sept 7, 2017 18:34:08 GMT 7
And m o nic a, there is a resemblance, but you are far cleverer than her.
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 18:47:37 GMT 7
Of hippity, let me suppose he has only been married once. That it was a virgin marriage by both. Happy Days.
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bowie
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Post by bowie on Sept 7, 2017 19:23:22 GMT 7
And very fit son? Where is he? Training, boxing. Yep bleth. He could knock you out in a second. Me, dope on the ropes. Oh music:
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