I would only suggest changing the last line to "in our foggy buggy".

The alliteration will provide additional appeal.

Or another option- "on our foggy bottoms". To add a feeling of sensuality.

Try "Bunny Boiler", much favoured by certain mangos.
Sorry for the reference <Bunny boiler>, see what happens m o ni c a.

^^^
And the piano is a copy of Debussy.

So it was about money?
Not from me.
But most like it, money that is.

Dreamer, you know you are a dreamer
Well can you put your hands in your head, oh no!
I said dreamer, you're nothing but a dreamer
Well can you put your hands in your head, oh no!
I said "far out, what a day, a year, a life it is!"
You know, well you know, you had it comin' to you
Now, there's not a lot I can do
Dreamer, you stupid little dreamer

So now you put your head in your hands, oh no

[Verse 1]
Now here you go again, you say you want your freedom
Well, who am I to keep you down?
It's only right that you should play the way you feel it
But listen carefully to the sound of your loneliness

[Pre-Chorus]
Like a heartbeat drives you mad
In the stillness of remembering of what you had
And what you lost and what you had and what you lost

[Chorus]
Thunder only happens when it's raining
Players only love you when they're playing
Say women they will come and they will go
When the rain washes you clean, you'll know, you'll know

^^not while there's feminists alive on this planet it won't.